Who are you?
Who, who, who, who?
Who are you?
Who, who, who, who?
I was born in Rhode Island,
But Florida is where i came,
I have a twin brother,
Though he is not the same,
Im very shy,
not many words will flow out of me,
Get me outdoors
and than you will see,
a different side of me,
I take many adventures,
which makes me more me,
Jumping out of planes,
or diving deep into the sea,
nothing seems to stop little 'ol me
Do you wonder?
Who am I?
Who, who, who, who?
Who am I?
Who, who, who, who?
Who am I?
Who, who, who, who?
Who am I?
Who, who, who, who?
(some of this rhymes, some doesn't... sorry)
-Rachel Hodkoski
It sounds fantastic! even your free verse has rhythm. Can't wait to see who makes links and where those links take us. I love the outdoors, too. Boyd Hill is the cure for writer's block, I tell ya!
ShareRiff
Comments (1)
Anonymous said
at 12:04 pm on Jul 18, 2008
I think your a little harsh on your song.. I just moved down here from up north as well about year ago
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