The introduction lead perfectly into the paper. It grabbed the reader's attention and allows them to participate starting with the very first sentence. The topic of the paper is clearly defined and doesn't stray from it the entire time.

The quotes that were used were placed effciently and cited appropriately.

The chart in the middle provides an alternative way to look at all the information they are giving us.

And the conclusion restates the topic, and wraps it up nicely.

I give this paper an