"Dreams Becoming Reality"

By: TaShonda Sconiers

Rationale: I chose to write about how past events in my life helped prepare me for my future career that was once a dream that i am turning into reality. I am striving to have a sustainable nursing career. I love helping others in any way possible. Being raised by christians I have experienced first hand that you should treat others how you would want to be treated. I think that is a great motto to go by in life.

Invention Process: It was not hard for me to come up with this concept to write about family, God, and hard times because without God I would not have had the oppportunity to have a family to help me along the bumpy roads in life.

Compositional Technique: I think I transitioned into next paragraghs rather well.I also liked the fact that I was able to "mix" the fact that I want to become a SUSTAINABLE nurse with a narrative about my life.

Evaluation Criteria: As far as evaluation criteria, I believe I used pathos in my writing. I allowed the readers to understand my emotions. and I think that gave them a chance to relate to what I was saying in my narrative. Overall, I did the best that I could do. I opened up to the readers. I let them know my true feelings about events that has happened in my life that has allowed me to become a better person. I know that this is not a 2000 word paper, but I did try. I am going to need a little more help with writing papers. I do not down myself much but i do need help writing papers. And that is the reason I am in this class...to learn more. I tried my best though:). I hope you enjoy reading my paper.

I think I do need help with learnign how to expand my papers to the max. I also need help on how to combine two different subjects in a way that they both are exposed evenly.