peer review day - bring 3 hard copies, and make sure your wiki is ready
over the weekend : please provide feedback for Tyler, Ani, and Christian
Tyler
Ani (link here)
Christian Sustainable Architecture
what is the thesis statement?
look at each paragraph: what is the main idea in each paragraph? Is the paragraph dedicated to discussion of one idea, or many ideas?
look at the sequence of main ideas. What is the effect of this sequence? Does it make sense to you?
look at the transitions. Do they reflect on what has been said so far? Do they set up or anticipate what is about to follow?
look for the audience: who is the writer addressing in this piece? Is the tone (word choice, imagery and metaphor, attitude towards the subject matter, towards audience, and towards the language itself) appropriate? What about the mixture of ethos, logos, and pathos? Is it balanced and tuned towards the needs, knowledge, and expectations of the target audience?
look at the grammar and usage: if you see a sentence that needs help, underline it and tell the writer why you think it needs tuning. Try your hand at revising at least 3 sentences.
we will provide each other with value feedback!
discuss: audience, audience, audience, and cover sheets
unit one - narrative and definition
Looking ahead to unit two - beginning with the definitional strategies of branding, we move to causal argumentation and evaluation
cover page
rationale, invention process, compositional technique, and evaluation criteria
specs
2000 words
5 outside sources, listed in a bibliography in the style of your choice
at least 5 links, with set up and explanation
title, headers and clear signposts for readers along the way
an epigraph
at least one image
at least one sound
cover sheet
Absent
Tyler
Ani
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