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JulyEleven

Page history last edited by PBworks 15 years, 8 months ago

 

peer review day - bring 3 hard copies, and make sure your wiki is ready

 

over the weekend : please provide feedback for Tyler, Ani, and Christian

 

Tyler

Ani (link here)

Christian Sustainable Architecture

 

what is the thesis statement?

 

look at each paragraph: what is the main idea in each paragraph? Is the paragraph dedicated to discussion of one idea, or many ideas?

 

look at the sequence of main ideas. What is the effect of this sequence? Does it make sense to you?

 

look at the transitions. Do they reflect on what has been said so far? Do they set up or anticipate what is about to follow?

 

look for the audience: who is the writer addressing in this piece? Is the tone (word choice, imagery and metaphor, attitude towards the subject matter, towards audience, and towards the language itself) appropriate? What about the mixture of ethos, logos, and pathos? Is it balanced and tuned towards the needs, knowledge, and expectations of the target audience?

 

look at the grammar and usage: if you see a sentence that needs help, underline it and tell the writer why you think it needs tuning. Try your hand at revising at least 3 sentences.

 

we will provide each other with value feedback!

 

discuss: audience, audience, audience, and cover sheets

 

unit one - narrative and definition

 

Looking ahead to unit two - beginning with the definitional strategies of branding, we move to causal argumentation and evaluation

 

cover page

rationale, invention process, compositional technique, and evaluation criteria

 

 

specs

 

2000 words

5 outside sources, listed in a bibliography in the style of your choice

at least 5 links, with set up and explanation

title, headers and clear signposts for readers along the way

an epigraph

at least one image

at least one sound

cover sheet


Absent

Tyler

Ani

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